The feedback I recieved from my critique in the IOT unit was overall very positive. The work I had to show was mostly from before I had the 'Gardening on a Showstring' book, so it was not directly related but was more experimentation with drawing mediums and styles with plant life as the subject.
Vincent was very happy with the style of work I was working towards, which was watercolour and pencil based, and he was impressed that I had begun to create infographics, as this showed my understanding of my subject.
I was encouraged to work larger. My current sketchbook for the project is A5 size and I was told my final drawings would be better off if drawn lager and scaled down, rather than scaled up. I was also encouraged to create roughs before preparing my final designs.
It was also suggested that I play around a bit more with my chosen mediums, watercolour, pencil and ink pencil, and to then focus on the one I think is mot successful, which was suggested to be the combination of watercolour and pencil.